Thursday, May 13, 2010

"जेठ की सुबह"

1.मंजिल की ...
 ना रही
अब  जुस्तजू
मुझको....


राह-ए-संगदिल....
आप सा मिल गया है ,
अब तो...


2.सुबह की राह्जोई है
 रात...



मरी नहीं...


बस सोई है
 रात...

3.पर ...

किसी किसी की रात,
ऐसे सो जाती है..

कि.....
सपने भी सो जाते हैं,

और  बस ...
जेठ की सुबह ही
हिस्से में आती है...

10 comments:

sangeeta swarup said...

गहरी सोच...खूबसूरत क्षणिकाएं

Jyotsna Pandey said...

बहुत सुन्दर!

मरी नहीं, बस! सोई है रात....

सपनों का सो जाना, और जेठ की सुबह का हिस्से में आना..... बहुत खूब!

शुभकामनाये....लेखन के लिए .

अर्चना तिवारी said...

वाह बहुत खूब...आपको पहली बार इस मूड में देख रही हूँ..

jenny shabnam said...

डाक्टर साहब,
यूँ तो आपकी ये तीनों रचना पढ़ चुकी हूँ, पर एक साथ पढ़कर बहुत अच्छा लगा, तीन अलग अलग मनोदशा पर लिखी गई रचना|
''मरी नहीं, बस! सोई है रात'' इस भाव केलिए बहुत धन्यवाद|
सकारात्मक सोच के साथ सुन्दर शब्द संयोजन...
बहुत बधाई और शुभकामनाएं|

mystic smile 'Keya' said...

Good morning Sir, pehle toh sorry, itne dino baad aapka blog chk krne k liye... n then.... ya bahut achha likh h aapne ,,,aap sher-o-shairi bhi karne lage... really good :)

Anonymous said...

hahahahahha nice 1

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Anonymous said...

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